Mr.Fantastic

My goal for drawing this character was to make my version of Reed Richards the coolest out of any artist that has drawn him before. I'm not sure if I did quite what I wanted but I feel I did not hit the mark I wanted to hit so I will probably try again sometime soon :/ . I think Jim Lee's version was probably the best one so far (well out of the ones I've seen). I also choose this character because he is normally not on anybody's top 10 favorite superheroes (well nobody I know anyway :/) so I wanted to kind of make him look really cool you know. But oh well, I think this pic is a good drawing overall (I like the background and I thought the lightning was a cool effect ) but I'm not to sure about the "cool factor". Hmm ? I don't know , what do you think ?